Help a friend with their writing!

11/9/2015

Help a friend with their writing!

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Are you having trouble with your writing? WE ALL ARE! WRITING IS TOUGH!

Maybe you're having trouble putting together an entertaining beginning, or maybe you cant figure out what your climax/main event is going to be. Maybe you're having trouble building suspense? Tell us what you need to work on, and we'll help you!

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49 Comments

johnny

11/9/2015 10:37:34

I have used the word "wolf" 43 times already in my paper, and I'm only 3 paragraphs in. Can anyone suggest some word referents for me?

Billy Bob

11/9/2015 11:19:53

How about "beast"?

purple unicorn flower girl

11/9/2015 15:28:08

Hi everyone! I keep using the words like boom, crash, and crack does anyone know any other words that I can use in my story instead of those words?

Zebra print

11/9/2015 15:37:20

Maybe you can use the word bang

Nohls

11/9/2015 15:49:45

You could use Pow or Smash.

The trio of DEASIL JEANS,COWGRE,and JORDAN BELFORT link

11/9/2015 17:13:01

A good word is Zoom or Bam. Like Zoom!there she goes flying by everyone. Or Bam!dropped the large piano during the concert.

Colonel Sanders

11/9/2015 15:29:37

I am having trouble showing not telling the reader

Fiery hairball

11/9/2015 15:45:20

Try to describe the object using dialogue and think of synonyms for the words you come up with

!OM-NOM-NOM!

11/9/2015 15:30:22

Hello there. Does anyone know Snow White's prince's name? :-)

- !!*!!OM-NOM-NOM!!*!!

Colonle Sanders

11/9/2015 15:32:56

Prince Charming

purple unicorn flower girl

11/9/2015 15:49:33

looked it up on the internet his name is Ferdinand

Cheesy

11/9/2015 16:37:42

Prince Charming, it is!

ilovereading

11/9/2015 17:13:40

I think its prince charming

!OM-NOM-NOM!

11/9/2015 18:32:43

I thought Prince Charming was for Cinderella. But I may be wrong...

Pens

11/9/2015 18:09:57

Snow White's prince is named "the prince."

Mr.pestone

11/9/2015 15:31:42

I need a applauding happy sound. Got any ideas?

The perfect drawer

11/9/2015 15:50:44

You could say whoa whoa whoa. You could also put in clapping sounds like clap clap clao

Lebron James British tomato

11/9/2015 15:35:20

Hi. I need some STUFF to describe the colors red and green.

The perfect drawer

11/9/2015 16:00:15

As the blood red paint dripped from the wall...

Mr.Pestone

11/9/2015 16:20:54

I saw fir green sticky notes at the store.

Zebra print

11/9/2015 15:40:54

I don't know any good woods to use in my fairy tale

Fiery hairball

11/9/2015 15:42:42

I do not no were to put my character description

!OM-NOM-NOM!

11/9/2015 18:39:15

Maybe you could put it in as someone is walking into a room and they see them. Here is an example: as I walked in the gigantic ball room I saw the beautiful princess. I could not take my eyes of of her stunning blue ball gown...

Nohls

11/9/2015 15:45:57

Hey guys.I've been using the word said too much and I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions for words other than that.

The perfect drawer

11/9/2015 16:03:03

U could use told or mention
As he/she described

Hobo Joe

11/9/2015 16:29:34

You could use "replied..." or "mentioned..." and other stuff like that.

Hobo Joe

11/9/2015 16:34:19

Maybe mentioned or suggested and other stuff.

pink unicorn

11/9/2015 15:46:24

Hi guys I need some words to describe my evil cat. Any ideas!

Cheesy

11/9/2015 16:36:18

I thought of beastly or mean.

The perfect drawer

11/9/2015 15:53:36

Anybody have good onnimonapeas or action words
How about cool powers

the kangeroo kickboxer

11/9/2015 16:26:11

I need some new disruptive vocab words. Not from our packet but other ones.

Hobo Joe

11/9/2015 16:32:31

I have some trouble with what should be the climax of my fairytale.

Fiery hairball

11/9/2015 17:19:28

You climax should be the most exciting part the part you think you can make the most exciting

Cheesy

11/9/2015 16:33:59

I need some words for very.

ilovereading

11/9/2015 17:16:43

extra, super or really

The perfect drawer

11/10/2015 07:19:24

Mix it up
Extreme

Frisky Ferret Female

11/9/2015 17:17:12

I'm running out of sound words can you help me

Happy Bannana

11/9/2015 18:10:20

You could use crash or boom if it fits in you're story

The perfect drawer

11/10/2015 07:21:07

Ahhhhhhh
Roarrr
Thump thump thump
Clink
Boom

ilovereading

11/9/2015 17:20:33

Should i have a talking horse or a talking unicorn in my story?

Frisky Ferret Female

11/11/2015 20:33:52

Unicorns

The trio of DEASIL JEANS,COWGRE ,and JORDAN BELFORT

11/9/2015 17:21:55

Hey guys I keep using words like Whoosh Bam and Boom. Have any other words I could use. Also when I've been using those words I wondered if I should use them like...Whoosh! As one sentence or like... Whoosh...and continue the sentence.

The trio of DEASIL JEANS,COWGRE,and JORDAN BELFORT

11/9/2015 17:27:28

You can use the words like Zoom or Bam

Pens

11/9/2015 17:58:59

Should I keep writing my characters name or should I write she?

Happy Bannana

11/9/2015 18:08:02

I can't figure out a paragraph starter for my story

Average_Mermaid

11/9/2015 19:31:47

I am not sure what to name the King/ Superhero. Can someone help me out?

The perfect drawer

11/10/2015 07:27:05

You could use
King Edward or King Hendrick
For superheroes if they are a animal I think of my favorite season and what I love in it. If they are a human then I just think of one of the powers they have and what they act like. Then I use what they act and put man/woman at the end.

bluesparkles

11/9/2015 21:18:37

I am having trouble thinking of descriptive words for my fairytale. do you have any ideas?

Frisky Ferret Female

11/11/2015 20:35:01

How big should my pomegranate be?

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