Try it Again Homework :(

4/25/2017

Try it Again Homework :(

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Okay...Try it again. USE FULL EFFORT!
Write about 10 seconds in time. This time, it could be about you, someone you know, or a fictional character!
Here is a pro tip: Write about the senses. What did it feel like? Smell like? Taste like? Sound like? Look like?

Remember to include at least one simile and try to use "show not tell" writing!

5 Comments

Zahraa A

4/25/2017 13:41:04

I was about to open my bag with my stuff I saw the new mint pack and I knew that it will taste really good it will be like a bubble party in my mouth when I tried it!I also know that it will be
A pack of wild animals just running around like crazy over and over again. When it was like my mouth was already in love with the flavor. I was addicted to that thing . When my friend came over they tried the mint it was like they had a huge mouthful of cupcakes on her look. It was the best!

Joseph Nguyen

4/25/2017 16:06:24

I was playing around the world with my cousins and sister. We were still stuck on the first part. Then it was my sister turn got the basketball and started to shoot everything in the hoop. "SWOOSH" it went in. Then as she got to the end I saw her determination from her eyes. Just then as she shot it under the hoop...It made it in! I heard my team yelled and I could smell sweet victory when the other team only smelled defeat.

Chloe N

4/25/2017 18:59:42

As the roller coaster was climbing to the top I felt like I was climbing a wobbly ladder. Then all of a sudden I could see the ground as if everyone were tiny ants. Then we just dropped and my stomach felt like it was left behind. I couldn't stop screaming because it was scary and fun at the same time.

Ben Killeffer

4/25/2017 21:07:36

I walked into my living room thinking this is the most boring day ever but then I heard something like cool it sounded like a video game then I saw her laying on the couch with headphones on I wanted to play with her so I grabbed my tablet and was just about to play a game with her but then my dad said we were going to have a pool party as my face grew with excitement I knew this day was going to be amazing!

Nolan

4/28/2017 15:30:51

GO! I run faster that flash but I was to slow because I was not in first but second. They could run forever but I still try. I ran and ran faster and faster I go. God gives me speed because all of the sudden I was in first! That didn't stop me though because I kept running till I see the finish line. I run till I feel something I hit. It was the finish line! I won 1st and I felt like a football player running the whole field without getting touched once. I was proud of myself.

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