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9/19/2016

CREATIVE WRITING HOMEWORK (9/19-9/23)

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Pick one of these prompts and submit your writing by Thursday night.  You have all week so I expect quality work, a 4 on the effort scale! Before you post, ask yourself:
Would my parents put this on the refrigerator?
Am I proud of this?


-You are a lion at the zoo. Write a paragraph about your typical day.
-It was a dull day until the planet was invaded by.......
-If your family had a motto, what would it be?
-Adults are so weird because...

-If you could travel anywhere under the sea, where would you go?
-A couple cars next to each other at a stoplight are having a conversation. What are they saying?
-Describe the best Saturday you ever had!
-Nike is releasing a brand new shoe and they want your advice...what do you tell them?
-At lunch, you feel something on your legs.  You look down and there’s a small animal that says, “hide me!” in a raspy voice. What do you do?
-A fork and spoon has been following you. Why?!?!
-You are trapped in a ballerina’s shoe.  What does it feel like?
-You have an opportunity to use a time machine. What time period would you travel to and why?
-Invent the most disgusting dish you can think of. Write the recipe and how you make it!
-Write about the first time you heard your favorite song!

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19 Comments
Joseph Nguyen
9/20/2016 16:09:25

It was a dull day until the planet was invaded by the monkeys! The only person that could stop them was JeffBob. He didn't know what to do so he threw a ball at them. It didn't work so he threw a stick at him still didn't work. But JeffBob realized that monkeys like. So he found the closet store to him. he grabbed a bunch of them. then he went outside and the monkeys saw him. So he was running to the mountain and threw the bananas in the ocean. The monkeys jump down got the bananas and been living in the cave down their since. But JeffBob was now a hero.

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Chloe nicastro
9/20/2016 18:27:34

Catfish pizza
If you want to learn how you make catfish pizza here's the recipe.
1 pound of meat
1 catfish
1/2cups of ketchup
1tps of salt
And 6 cups of salt water.

That's how you make catfish pizza.

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Celina Poon
9/20/2016 20:22:35

It was a dull day until it was a invaded by slimy disgusting mutated RATS!When it arived it said in a raspy voice be friends .But every body was so scared they did not want to be friends except one little girl name Rosy but she was to shy to say something.Since nobody said yes the rats started atacking!Everbody ran in horor!But In a few moments the little girl Rosy said I will be your friend and the rats stop atacking and turned into a cute Kitty!

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Nolan Keane
9/21/2016 16:02:47

If I was a lion at the zoo a typical day would be that I would hang around my cage and eat my breakfast. Then the zoo would open and people would watch me roam around. I would wag my tail and let out a huge yawn. I would chase my friends and my parents would sleep. I would play for awhile and then wake my parents ,eat dinner in front of people and I would roar! The zoo would close and I would sleep until the next day.

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Ky
9/21/2016 17:13:00

If I were trapped in a ballerina's shoes. I would think it was sweaty if they just used them. It would be smelly because of the sweat. I think it would be dirty in the inside but look nice on the outside. I think that's how it feels to be trapped inside of a ballerina's shoes.

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Aidan Russell
9/21/2016 17:39:12

I heard my favorite song on the radio it was Panda. I was thinking about it all day while I was playing video games. Then I ate supper, I still was singing Panda in my head. Then at bedtime I was still singing in my mind. Also in the morning I was still singing it in my head and at breakfast. I was also brushing my teeth when I was singing the song Panda backwards!!

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Aidan Boyle
9/21/2016 20:31:52

I wake up one morning and say, just another day in the zoo. Did I mention that I am a lion? A day in the zoo is much different than a day as a human. As a human you get to do many more things than a lion. You see as a lion you don’t do very much. All I get to do is eat, sleep, play, drink, and use the bathroom. Oh ya I also get to see these suspicious critters as they walk by my domain. They don’t have any fur (only on their heads. They call it hair.) These critters only walk on two legs. They DON’T HAVE A TAIL EITHER. The human life is way different from a lion life. I’m glad I’m not a human.

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Kelsea Doherty
9/22/2016 16:12:54

Time Machine
If I had an opportunity to use a time machine I would go back to the 17th century. I would like to go to this time period because I want to see the pilgrims get off the MayFlower. I want to see the expressions on the pilgrims faces after their long journey. I know that their journey was difficult because they did not have a lot of food and they had to go on the lower deck where there was not a lot of air. When they reached the shore they must have felt thankful and happy. I would have liked to been there to see their relief. When I meet them I will ask them questions about their life. I want to know how they make clothes,food,and houses and I want to see it with my own eyes. I would also like to watch them hunt.I want to learn the games they played back then and I want to play them myself.I want to see the pilgrims!
By: Kelsea Doherty

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Sadie Webster
9/22/2016 17:19:32

The time I was trapped in a ballerinas shoe it was very tight,smelly it smelt like sweaty feet. I noticed that i could maybe jump out so i tried and it worked i’m out! Finally, fresh air. I never want to be trapped in a ballerinas shoe again.

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Lars
9/22/2016 18:25:49

Hello, my name me is Luke. Did Have you ever wonder what a typical for me a lion at a zoo? Well that's why I am here for. At 8:00 AM I do my mighty roar and for a reward I get a delightful, delirious, and carving meaty cheesy surprise. Okay so at 9:00 AM it's basically rush hour. I honestly hate it.Oh and guess who's cage is the most popular,mine. So at 12:00 PM I get my lunch. You probably think I eat like a king but I do the complete opposite of that. When it's 3:00 PM I am more happier then ever. I feel that way because I get to take a nap for three hours and nobody is aloud to disturb me. At 6:00 PM the serve me dinner. Lastly at 8:30 PM I go to sleep. Good night.

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Andrew
9/22/2016 19:12:34

It was a dull day until the planet was invaded by.......

It was a dull day until there was a loud BOOM!!! I went to go check what was going on. While I was heading to the loud sound, I saw a green thing on the way. I could tell it was a living thing because it was moving. It had two long antennas which his eyes stood on, and it was carrying a hammer. Then I realised that it was an alien! Aliens were invading the city! I instantly decided to call my best friends Andrew, Ramon, and Raya for help. When I got to their secret base, (it’s secret because it is invisible, and only I know about it) I pressed the secret button that would teleport me to the base.
When I arrived, Andrew, Raya, and Ramon were there with worried looks painted across their faces. “Guys, you have to save us! The-““We know Tom (sorry, I should have told you this earlier, but my name is Tom), the city is being invaded by aliens. And when I was at the watch tower, I saw a big grey thingy that was dropping the aliens” said Andrew. “That must be their UFO (unbelievable fling object). We have to destroy that to get rid of all the aliens” added Ramon.” What are you waiting for?” asked Raya “let’s get cited up and get those aliens” “OK, but remember, we have to destroy the UFO first, or otherwise we’ll be fighting aliens for the rest of our lives” remained Andrew. ”Hey, what is that big black target – like thing?” asked Ramon. “It looks like we have to hit that to explode the UFO”I said “Hey do you think we can hit it with arrows?” I suggested. “There’s only one way to find out” Andrew said “too the archer towers!”
We all went to the archer towers. They were made of cobblestone and had roofs made of wood. We grabbed our bows and started firing arrows at the UFO. The first few arrows landed sort, but as time went on, they started to get closer. Finally, Raya said “I think my one is going to hit it. And she was right. The arrow sored through the air and landed square in the dot. We all held our breaths for something to happen. After a few seconds, the ground shook and the sky lit up as the unbelievable flying object blue up with a KABOOM!!!
We all started cheering as the last bits of the UFO fell to the ground. “That’s enough cheering for now” said Raya “we still need to defeat the aliens” “Easy said than done. There are thousands of them. We’ll never defeat them” I complained. “You mean easy done than said” said Andrew” fire at will, TNT canons, activate. As if on cue, a part of the wall disappeared, reliving a line of TNT canons, ready to fire. I looked in awe. There must have been fifty canons, all lined up and ready to fire. Ramon started the count down, “Five…. Four…. Three…. Two…. One…. FIRE !!!” The sky got dark as it started raining TNT down on the alien army. “Now can we cheer?” I asked Raya. “What… oh, sure. And so we did. Some aliens tried to cover themselves by putting their hammers over their heads, but stone hammers were no match for TNT explosions. As we watch, we cheered as the last of the aliens were defeated.
Another job done for me, Tom, and my best friends: Andrew, Ramon, and Raya.

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Aidan Russell
9/23/2016 14:13:55

Wow nice job Andrew how did you write that much?

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Lydia Cheng
9/23/2016 13:43:29

I am going to make the most disgusting meal ever! First you need to can of sardines,two can of tuna, three cans of cat food, and one water bottle. Then mix all up with a smoothie blender and electric mixer. So there the most disgusting meal ever!




Lydia Cheng




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Allison Lee
10/25/2016 14:31:09

Wow. I never thought of that. I like your idea. How did you think of that?

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Lais
9/23/2016 14:14:11

The tarantula

One day at lunch I felt something on my legs.I looked down there was a tureranchaula on my leg and it told me “Hide me”! In a raspy voice.I got scared for a second I said “Why?” In a whispery voice.The tarantula answered me “I’m hiding from the exterminator he’s trying to exterminate me.”Said the tarantula in a scared voice.When lunch was over we went out for recess We played until it was over.School is finally over.Then I went home and I asked my mom to bring me to The mall to buy me a cage for the tarantula but I just said I need a cage for my science experiments I lied to her.I put the tarantula in the cage for the whole day and then in the morning I told my mom I had a tureranchaula she was cool with it, I was happy. we live happily ever after.

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Chloe Liang
9/23/2016 15:13:35



Question:You are trapped in a ballerina shoe. What does it feel like?

If I was trapped in a ballerina shoe it would feel all squishy, hottish, and really tight. It would not feel good at all if I was trapped in a ballerina shoe. That is what it will feel like if I was trapped in a ballerina shoe.

From: Chloe Liang

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Mackenzie Pham
9/23/2016 16:50:27

Adults are weird. They are weird because they always worry about money and do other weird stuff tahst kids can't do which is fair to me. Adults are also weird because they get jobs. Why would people get Jobs? Thats why Adults are weird.

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Cole Zupkofska
9/24/2016 09:08:50

Cole Zupkofska

I am going to make the most disgusting dish I’ve ever made in my life. First, you need a rotten peach pie. Next, you need a huge skunk. After that, you need dog poop. Finally, we need 20 gallons of water. Then you mix all the ingredients together in a big pot on the stove. Once it is bubbling, remove from stove and put it in the oven at 350 degrees for half hour. You can use oven mitts to take it out and serve it.There you have it.

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Skyla Eaton
9/25/2016 21:06:14

Dirt smoothie
Step 1 --. Add a half a cup swamp water..
Step 2 -- two cups of dirt in a mixing bowl
Step 3 -- 4 rotten eggs
Step 4-- add one dirty old sock
Step 5 - into blender
Now slurp

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