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9/28/2017

Choose ANOTHER prompt and write!

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-Describe the coolest treehouse in the world!
-One time you were at Chipotle. You got up to refill your soda and when you came back, there was a note for. What did it say?
-Mrs. Soto asked you to write a speech for the Respect Assembly. What will it say? 
-You created a new health food that tastes gross! How will you sell it to everybody? Write an advertisement for it!
-You are a lion at the zoo. Write a paragraph about your typical day.

-It was a dull day until the planet was invaded by.......
-If your family had a motto, what would it be?
-Adults are so weird because...
 
-If you could travel anywhere under the sea, where would you go? 
-A couple cars next to each other at a stoplight are having a conversation. What are they saying? 
-Describe the best Saturday you ever had! 
-Nike is releasing a brand new shoe and they want your advice...what do you tell them? 
-At lunch, you feel something on your legs.  You look down and there’s a small animal that says, “hide me!” in a raspy voice. What do you do? 
-A fork and spoon has been following you. Why?!?! 
-You are trapped in a ballerina’s shoe.  What does it feel like? 
-You have an opportunity to use a time machine. What time period would you travel to and why? 
-Invent the most disgusting dish you can think of. Write the recipe and how you make it! 
-Write about the first time you heard your favorite song!

​EXPECTATIONS:
-1 paragraph of at least 5-8 complete sentences. 
-Punctuation!
-Capital letters to begin sentences!
-Always leave a space after an "end mark"
-Check spelling!
-Check to make sure your sentences MAKES SENSE By PROOFREADING!
-Show not tell!

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28 Comments
Shealy Keane
9/28/2017 16:02:05

I was eating lunch and I hear a Chinchilla say "hide me" in a raspy voice I hide it I ask it "how an you talk" it said "I can talk because I'm magic. So the next day I bought him a cage and named him Cheche and we be became best friends. I watch TV together, played together and hung out together. Later I bought him real food and then someone called "hello" I said they told me they had lost a pet I asked them what pet they said a chinchilla. Later we met up with them they called Cheche, Lucky. "Lucky" said "my name is Cheche and I don't want to live with you" they said " why?" Cheche said "Because I don't like you I like Shealy." He hopped on my shoulder and we left we became closer than ever after that day. I'm so happy I found him.

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Leonel
10/2/2017 13:42:44

To Shealy
I like how your pet is really happy to be with you and wants hang out with you and TV together to have it as a pet and be best friends and call you BFF Best Friends Forever. Shealy are borrowing for the day?

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Connor
10/2/2017 20:15:04

I love how at the end of your story how the chinchilla chose Shealy to go home with!

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Addison
10/12/2017 13:09:43

Your idea makes me think what it would be like to have a pet chinchilla. What made you think of the name cheche?

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Demetres
9/28/2017 17:18:38

I was very excited when my mom surprised me. We were going to Chipotle. We got to the restaurant and we got the food. I drank all my soda before we got the food. I got up to get a refill. When I got back my mom was gone and there was a note under my bread.

The note said.
Dear Demetres, go to the nearest gas station. I when to the nearest gas station. The guy at the front gave me another note that said.
Dear Demetres, mom is in front of you.

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Leonel
10/12/2017 13:10:00

To Olivia
The ingredients are to the cake is good because 4 cups of water to make a recipe and a good rest is good for your body to get exercise to learn how to bake a cake and decorate the cake when it is ready out from the oven and Olivia you can eat the cake and share it.

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Erin
10/12/2017 13:17:31

That was intense I thought you mom would get hurt or something. I loved your story it was super good.

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Olivia Turco
9/28/2017 20:19:20

How to make a disgusting dish of soup

Ingredients:
hair from a barber shop's floor, one handful
cat litter that’s dirty, two handfuls
one rotten heart from a deer
A rotten tomato
Blood 2 cups
cow manure, 1 cup
Water 3 cups

How to make it:

First boil a pot of water ,then add the hair from the barber shop to a medium heat,after that put the dirty cat litter into the boiling water with the hair. Mix in the heart from the deer into the soup. Add the rotten tomato and blood. You should mix for two minutes none stop. Let the soup simmer on low for 30 minutes.

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Connor
10/2/2017 20:16:11

This is super gross. Great Job!

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Addison
10/12/2017 13:11:11

If you made that dish in real life would you eat it?

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leo
9/28/2017 21:34:15

If i could any where in the sea i would wold go to the coral reef because it is so cool. When you are at the bottom.
The coral is so colorful. The fish are tiny and colorful but you have to watch out for sharks unless they will hurt you. I would also want go to see the see the sunken ship to explore. now that would be fun but scary at the same time. I would also want to bring some of my class mates with me.

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B link
9/29/2017 08:59:13

The most disgustingest dish ever.
Ingredients
3 cups of magnets.
4 cups of paper shreds
7 cups of dog food.
7 cups of cat food.
3 empty water bottles.
1 very big bowl .
1 cup of water.

First put the cups of magnets into the bowl.Then put cat and dog food into the bowl with the magnets stir very well. Put the cup of water and water bottles in then stir well. Then put the 4 cups paper shreds in the bowl then stir well and put it in the oven for 1 hour. Make sure it stays hot.

By Brady Wetzel

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Leah
9/29/2017 15:43:13

Hi, I,m Isabella I,m in a ballet shoe.The girl Morgan is really talented. I think she could go on the show the nutcracker she is that good. Three Years Later. Hi again Its me Isabella.Morgan just got into a ballet collage. But know we don,t really hang out anymore. She is always a dance and , she comes home really late so i do not see her that much. But she is doing what she loves so i am happy for her.

Sincerely, Isabella

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Erin
10/2/2017 13:37:41

Your story is like mine I love it! Are you the shoe?

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addison
10/2/2017 13:39:50

would you think differently if you were a shoe Morgan still wore.

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Leah
10/12/2017 13:10:36

I'm sorry Addison but can you repeat that comment??

isaiah j
9/29/2017 20:16:40

If i were to advertise a nasty food but it was healthy I would say It is going to heal all your bruises an scraches and pimples. And I would also say don't judge a book by its cover! Also I would say how do you know if its good our bad its just fruit .Another thing is its only five cent so you might as well buy it.If you like Mr.Krabs and cheap. Finnaly,Its so healthy it will give you energy for fourty-eight ours. That is my plan to greatness!

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Luca
10/1/2017 15:33:43

One day I was at Chipotle refilling my orange soda and when I got back there was a note that said “meet me at the football fields and bring a football”. I decided to call some of my friends to play I called Patrick, Ryan, Timmy and Nick. Later that night we all met up at the football fields. A familiar face appeared in the shadows it was Jack Hubbard, he challenged us to a football game. The scores were rising fast. In the last 50 seconds it was 48 to 49 we needed a touchdown to win. We planned our next play, we told Pat to be open in the end zone and be ready for the pass. I threw the ball to pat… he caught the ball and got the touchdown we won the game. We beat Jack 55 to 49. We celebrated all the way home.

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Erin
10/2/2017 13:31:20

I really like orange so good it is one of my favorite soda's!

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Ryan Spahiu
10/1/2017 19:24:43

Most disgusting dish ever
Ingredients
1,000 cans of spam and unicorn meat
1 cup of ipad
1,000 pieces of broccoli
1,000 cans of spinach
1,000 ounces of Germ x
1 red oak tree
100 ounces of liquid nitrogen
1,000 pounds of sweat
1,000 bags of dog and cat food
1,000 can of sardines
Then you boil everything up and leave it for a day then put it in the freezer for a month then drill in a stick then lick everything and you’re done.


By Ryan Spahiu

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addison
10/1/2017 19:40:23


When I got back from refilling my soda, there was a note on my table and it said…

Dear Addison,

You have been chosen to help the baby animals of the world. You will need to make sure every baby animal has a home and someone to care for it. You will need to finish this task by winter. If not, you will not be able to do this next time the animals need help, so finish this task and a reward will be given to you in the tree outside your bedroom window.

Thank you for agreeing to do this task!

Sincerely,
Mike The Mouse

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Leah
10/12/2017 13:16:51

Now that I think about it is Mike the mouse did you know him or is it just a random mouse???????

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Erin Savage
10/1/2017 20:52:18

One afternoon i went to Chipotle. I was filling up my drink with icy cold lemonade and i dropped my plate. So I went to pick it up and throw it away. When I came back to get my drink there was a note. It had yellow lined paper, green stains, and smelt super bad. It looked suspicious so I did not open it right away. When I finally opened note, it said I was the millionth customer and i would receive free Chipotle for life!! I could eat Chipotle for for dinner every night with free refills. I can go to the front of the line and order anything I want. This is so exciting!!

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Luca
10/2/2017 13:32:38

Amazing twist I thought it was going to say your arrested because you stole something.

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Nora
10/2/2017 13:38:42

L really like your writing because it has a lot of information.
And it is really nice because it has a lot of detail in it.

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Leonel
10/12/2017 13:25:39

Connor I have a Question.The pie you are making is made of apples?

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Connor Doughty
10/2/2017 19:58:54

It was a dull day until alien apples invaded our planet!The apples came in pie space shuttles. They took our apples and enslaved them. When we tried to rescue our apples, they threatened to shoot us with apple seeds. How could we stop them? What could we do?
We realized we could use our horses to save our planet. We sent our horses out to defend us. The horses ate thousands of the evil apples and forced the invaders to leave our planet! With the excitement over, I went back to doing my math homework.

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Shealy
10/12/2017 13:15:45

After the aliens invaded I thought you were going to be board again but you had to finish homework.

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