10 Seconds in Time - Your April Vacation Moment

4/24/2017

10 Seconds in Time - Your April Vacation Moment

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SAME AS LAST TIME! BUT...this should be about the most exciting thing that happened to you over vacation.
Write a ONE PARAGRAPH that includes show-not-tell writing AND 1-2 similes.
Write this response about the most exciting 10 seconds of your vacation.

Read your last blog post(s) BEFORE you start this one!!!!!!!

Sadie Webster

4/24/2017 16:10:07

I woke up excited as cute puppies playing with their new toy. I ran to my parents room as fast as a race car racing down the streets. Once they both opened their eyes my siblings and I ran downstairs to the baskets. My heart was racing as fast as a cheetah running I was so happy. I got my Easter basket and started to bathe in my candy i got. I love Easter morning.

Mackenzie

4/25/2017 13:14:50

I love your story! What are the puppies names? What kind of Candies you got from Easter? Anyway love your story great job!

Sadie

4/25/2017 13:27:52

Mackenzie the puppies were a simile and I got lots of jellybeans,chocolate,skittles, and starburst.

Aidan Russell

4/24/2017 16:37:30

It is 14-15 and 10 seconds left were losing by 1 we got to make a basket in! The coach put me in we jumped it and I got the ball I passed it to my team mate Mike and he does and lay up and... HE GETS IT IN. The all star champion's of Braintree! We finally won. I'm thinking that we lost but no we won!!!

Lars

4/25/2017 13:34:31

Sounds like you had the game in the basket.

mackenzie

4/24/2017 16:52:57

As the last bell rang my heart leaped like I saw a REAL pig! When we got our bags I felt like as if it was the last day of school! As we headed out all I could see is flowers blooming everywhere and bees buzzing all around. As I skipped to the bus.. I leaped onto my seat with lots of joy. As I looked at the window next to me. The school disappeared in a blink of an eye and as I looked up at the sky.. I knew I would have the best Spring break any kid has ever had!

Allison

4/25/2017 13:15:04

Great job, Mackenzie! No wonder that you mentioned pigs in this. It really felt like I was your classmate.(Even though I am.)

Allison

4/24/2017 18:53:59

Swish! The basketball bounced on the pavement. Me and my mom dashed to it like a lightning bolt, trying to snatch it away
my dad. However, my dad got there more quick than us. Me and mom stared as my dad dashed right past us like the Flash.
While my mom stared at amazing. I ran towards dad as fast as I can. However, I was to late. My father jumped up and
took a shot. When he did, the ball rolled around the ring and bumped off the rim onto the pavement. I looked
at my watch. 4 seconds left. I ran to the basketball and snatched it off the ground. I jumped up as high as I can
and took a shot. The basketball rolled around the rim and went in the rim. The score was 23 to 25. Me and mom
had 25 and my father had 23. I lifted up my nose and could smell the victory around me. Me and my mom had won.

Mackenzie

4/25/2017 13:16:53

Nice job winning! I wish I was there to cheer you on!

Sadie

4/25/2017 13:17:43

Good job Alison. You must of had a fun time.

Lars

4/25/2017 13:30:46

I bet the smell of victory smells amazing.

Chloe L

4/24/2017 19:37:35

Uhhh, I have been waiting so long to be on that swing! I looked around. I saw a girl next to me who was also waiting. Oh no, I cannot let her get to that swing before me or else I will be as mad as a angry bull. After the person got of the swing, I ran as fast as a cheetah to the swing and jumped onto it. Whew! I was relieved.

Lars

4/25/2017 13:17:36

Good job on those two similes Chloe.

Aidan B

4/24/2017 19:39:56

It was unbearable to see the ice cream sundae being made. I was wondering what was so wet until I looked in a mirror to see my face full of drool because I couldn’t wait any longer. I was like a dog waiting for a bone. Then suddenly I was eating my ice cream sundae.

Lars

4/25/2017 13:16:09

Waiting for delicious ice cream sundae is unbearable.

Skyla

4/25/2017 08:07:53

I did it, I squeezed the light blue blob it felt gooey. It made my fingers feel soft. It was the color of the sky it is soft and stretchy too. It reminded me of the first time I had ice-cream, amazing! I have been wanting for this a long time and I finally did it! I made slime. April vacation was tons of fun.

Mackenzie

4/25/2017 13:18:08

YOU made slime? LUCKY! I wish I was there! Nice story too!

Lydia

4/25/2017 13:06:42

I finally arrived at the airport with my dad. My sister and mom would finally get back from China! I heart was racing like a cheetah! I really wanted to see them again! Then without a warning my heart stopped racing and I finally saw my mom and sister get of of the plane! I raced over there to hug my sister and mom.

morin

4/25/2017 13:15:30

Lydia, you were supposed to right my not i

Allison

4/25/2017 13:19:07

Amazing job Lydia! However, there is two question waiting for you. Anyway, were your mom and sister only at China for a visit? Or did they live there?

Lydia

4/25/2017 13:24:54

Thank You Allison. My mom and sister only visited my family that are in China!

morin

4/25/2017 13:13:29

My new puppy

Bark! I heard a loud noise from downstairs. I went downstairs to see what that noise was. I was moving as slow as a turtle. Than suddenly my parents came out of nowhere “ I want you to close your eyes’ said my mother “okay” i said i closed my eyes shut tight. My parents held my hands as we went downstairs. “Okay open your eyes” said my father i slowly opened my eyes and right in front of me was a….. Puppy! I was so happy i even named her “joy” i whispered to myself. I stood up and said “ thank you mom and dad thank you so much for the puppy!”. That was the best 10 seconds of my life.

Nolan

4/25/2017 13:13:55

I connect the last brick of my Lego set. "YES! I DID IT!!!" I say in cheer. It looked like god gave it to me. It was the biggest Lego set i have ever built by hundreds of pieces. I looked like a fifteen year old that just got a car. I carefully put it on my shelf and was ready to show everyone my newly built Lego set.

Allison

4/25/2017 13:23:27

Nice! What type of set was it? And who gave it to you?

Ben

4/25/2017 13:33:36

those are really good similes Nolan but my favorite was the one were the 15 year old got a car

Lais

4/25/2017 13:21:29

Chocolate!
“GO!” Yelled my aunt. Kids were yelling so much my ears just wanted to fall off! I ran as fast as a cheetah to find those beautiful eggs that are hiding out there. I put all the eggs I could find in the basket. The eggs were as shiny as the sun. WOW! I couldn’t believe I had found so much! We finally finished! I was happy with how much Easter eggs I had found. We all counted how much eggs we found. I had 15! I ate so much sugary candy! I mostly ate chocolate. I should eat the GIANT CHOCOLATE EGG for my reward of trying hard.

Lars

4/25/2017 13:37:34

So many people are putting the simile "as fast as a cheetah" in there stories.

Cole Zupkofska

4/25/2017 13:25:33

I walk in my house, I hear a bark. I go too the noise… IT’S A DOG!!! Santa brought us a dog the day before Christmas Eve!!! He was as cute as a little guinea pig being born. I was running across the room getting my hand ready to pet him. His fur was as soft as my bed. He already had a name. BRUIN CHARLIE ZUPKOFSKA!!!

Lars

4/25/2017 13:28:07

My first bike ride alone
I got on my bike, and buckled my helmet. I started pedaling out of my driveway. As I the howling breeze blew against my face, I knew that this was only the beginning of something big. It feels like I’ve been waiting for this privilege so long that I am a walking skeleton. I was so happy that I was a balloon filled with happiness and joy. This was one of the most fun days of my life and I will never forget it.

Ben

4/25/2017 13:36:54

What did it feel like to be riding alone?

Ben

4/25/2017 13:28:22

I was opening a Christmas present. I wanted to see what was inside so much I felt like ripping it open but the tape on it was so hard to get off… YES I did it it's a huge Pokemon box!!! I have always wanted one of these I opened it and I got really rare cards! I could see how shiny it looked in my eyes I was so happy and my brother kept on yelling “that’s so cool!” and I couldn’t believe I got it I read what the Pokemon was called and it said Mega Charizard EX!!! I was to happy I felt like I was going to faint but of course I didn't it felt like I was though! I was so excited!!!

celina

4/25/2017 13:29:14

I finally arrived at the national monument Abraham Lincoln's big chair. What I saw was a big slide when I got on it was so fast like I was in a rocket ship and I just blasted of to space. It was also scary like a clown and a loopy loop roller coaster combined. When it was at its end there was so many feelings swirling around me. Had you ever had a experience like that?

Skyla

4/25/2017 13:38:42

Were is Abraham Lincoln's big chair?

Joseph Nguyen

4/25/2017 13:29:28

It was almost the end of the movie. I was as excited as someone getting a new dog and I wondered what was going to happen next. Then as I watched somehow a character in the movie traveled back in time to another person body. I was feeling like my head was going to explode. The character was trying to save a town. A second later it was 7 years in the future and then the character saw people in Tokyo that he saved he didn't remember them though he he forgot all about what happened but all the people he saved were okay. As the movie ended I knew that was the best movie ever!

Allison

4/25/2017 13:38:15

Awesome job Joey! I really like those two similes! I never thought of those!

4/25/2017 13:58:20

Tap! Tap! Tap! My friend and I were play Crossy road at Dave and Buster. We were tapping so fast that our hand feels numb. We raced and I could see the anger in her eyes that she was losing. So I started tapping faster and faster like a cheetah running towards its prey. In a blink of an eye swoosh I saw an eagle fly across the screen and snatch my friend’s character up. That was one of the most fun I had in that day.

CHLOE NICASTRO

4/25/2017 18:50:58

I hopped into the golf cart as if I was a kangaroo and quickly pulled out of the driveway I was driving down an empty street so I could go as fast as cheetah. Then some one saw me so my dad had to drive us back.

Zahraa Ali

5/6/2017 10:21:33

I was about to open my bag with my stuff I saw the new mint pack and I knew that it will taste really good it will be like a bubble party in my mouth when I tried it!I also know that it will be
A pack of wild animals just running around like crazy over and over again. When it was like my mouth was already in love with the flavor. I was addicted to that thing . When my friend came over they tried the mint it was like they had a huge mouthful of cupcakes on her look. It was the best!

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